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Jul 26 2013 06:44pm
I just did something for fun to see what i could do tell me what you think (i know in to left theres a few pixels i missed in deleting but i was thinking of adding a border so the whole sig doesnt look "squared off" as to say)

this is my secound attempt and is purely for fun and a learning experience.

Text could obviously be better but i dont have much to work with atm seeings as im just gtting back into trying ps

Lmk what you think thanks!



This post was edited by highdro on Jul 26 2013 06:49pm
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top left has a small area that needs to be cleaned up
looks like your render is standing ontop of a c4d.
don't really like the glow around the render
the text is hard to read. text is overall bad.
if you think you don't have much of a selection for fonts, go download some fonts.
adding a border wouldn't help much.
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Quote (Kokua @ Jul 26 2013 09:49pm)
107.92 KB (110,513 bytes)
top left has a small area that needs to be cleaned up
looks like your render is standing ontop of a c4d.
don't really like the glow around the render
the text is hard to read. text is overall bad.
if you think you don't have much of a selection for fonts, go download some fonts.
adding a border wouldn't help much.


i mentioned the top left area needs to be cleaned up, and text yes does need to be better (font i have is an actual sonic font but does need to be better) but like i said this was my secound try, but thanks you ro inp thats why im posting :) thanks again

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107.92 KB (110,513 bytes)
--i have easy fix for file size but this wasnt ment to be sold or anything
top left has a small area that needs to be cleaned up

-- already mentioned :)

looks like your render is standing ontop of a c4d.
--i can redo it so its over still have save of all layers sepereate

don't really like the glow around the render
--so i should remove?

the text is hard to read. text is overall bad.
--yes text is bad (need to learn some effects)

if you think you don't have much of a selection for fonts, go download some fonts.
adding a border wouldn't help much.

--Noted



This post was edited by highdro on Jul 26 2013 07:24pm
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Jul 26 2013 07:36pm
basically this looks really bad and if you want to improve stay away from popouts
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Jul 26 2013 08:29pm
Quote (Arcaeus @ Jul 26 2013 07:36pm)
basically this looks really bad and if you want to improve stay away from popouts. Unless you are extremely talented/skilled, and you arent.


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Quote (xXDreamAlongXx @ Jul 26 2013 10:29pm)
Cough


blazinphil was extremely talented/skilled (imo)
and his rectangle sigs were far better than the shitty popouts
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Jul 26 2013 10:02pm
Quote (Arcaeus @ Jul 26 2013 08:49pm)
blazinphil was extremely talented/skilled (imo)
and his rectangle sigs were far better than the shitty popouts


I thought we were talking about popouts?
Anyway, there have been a few really good popouts coming across this section, but I cant remember who they were.
The last good one i saw was probably a year ago.

You have made some really good progress too, you are pretty skilled your self.


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I just realized, this guy spelled second wrong.

This post was edited by xXDreamAlongXx on Jul 26 2013 10:04pm
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Quote (xXDreamAlongXx @ Jul 27 2013 12:02am)
I thought we were talking about popouts?
Anyway, there have been a few really good popouts coming across this section, but I cant remember who they were.
The last good one i saw was probably a year ago.

You have made some really good progress too, you are pretty skilled your self.


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I just realized, this guy spelled second wrong.


I lol'd
and do you know who I am?
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Jul 26 2013 11:59pm
Quote (Arcaeus @ Jul 26 2013 10:44pm)
I lol'd
and do you know who I am?


Nope, I have been brain washed by House MD.
I actually just made it up. Basically.
But you have a progress, and you have gotten better and I have no idea who you are. You certainly stuck to tagging longer than I did.
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=67788859&f=105

And this video is pretty freaking sick.
http://vimeo.com/24069938
Except I f*king hate spiders.

This post was edited by xXDreamAlongXx on Jul 27 2013 12:04am
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