Quote (CHurley @ May 10 2013 01:54pm)
That introduction in first person is so pretentious, I'd change it.
Some parts don't even make sense, and I don't know why you would put in "Often under-working rather than over-working, some pieces may look unfinished, though they are intended to look the way they do".
ed; keep painting though, there's definitely potential there
what parts sound pretentious?
it's also done in second-person, not first-person... the teacher suggested it that way
i do also underwork pieces intentionally, i didn't write things just for the heck of it o_O
Quote (UncleMuscles @ May 10 2013 01:27pm)
sigh...
i dont get it ._.