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Nov 28 2012 10:34pm
Signatures:





Pencil hand-drawn:

First profile sketch I've made (She is the prime minister of quebec, canada)

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Nov 28 2012 10:35pm
First portrait (thanks bro for being so patient ahahah)
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Nov 29 2012 01:50am
I really like the signatures! Well balanced and great composition

The lady looks kinda weird, shading is too stiff or something, needs more blending imo. Second one is decent, even though the pupils are off in size
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Nov 29 2012 06:33am
That portrait of your brother is great. Now you need to push the contrast, and push the values. Make the darks darker. It'l improve your portrait work tons
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Nov 29 2012 06:45am
Quote (CHurley @ Nov 29 2012 07:33am)
That portrait of your brother is great. Now you need to push the contrast, and push the values. Make the darks darker. It'l improve your portrait work tons


Quote (Alithea @ Nov 29 2012 02:50am)
I really like the signatures! Well balanced and great composition

The lady looks kinda weird, shading is too stiff or something, needs more blending imo. Second one is decent, even though the pupils are off in size


Thanks guys for the critic! I will work on that and try to improve :)
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Nov 29 2012 11:39am
Quote (Sadpanda2703 @ Nov 29 2012 04:45am)
Thanks guys for the critic! I will work on that and try to improve :)


All of it looks great! Nice work man
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Nov 29 2012 01:26pm
Quote (Jubileus @ Nov 28 2012 08:35pm)
First portrait(thanks bro for being so patient ahahah)
http://i1286.photobucket.com/albums/a605/sadpanda2703/gf.jpg


i like the portraits a lot, but i'd suggest using a variety of lighter / darker pencils (1h, 2h, 3h, 4h). this should help you achieve more contrast and have smoother gradients of shading.
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Dec 5 2012 06:02pm
Quote (ease. @ Nov 29 2012 03:26pm)
i like the portraits a lot, but i'd suggest using a variety of lighter / darker pencils (1h, 2h, 3h, 4h).  this should help you achieve more contrast and have smoother gradients of shading.


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Dec 9 2012 11:18pm
well done
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Dec 18 2012 10:32am
Do you want to make me a Leveling service layout?

Would be greatly appreciated!
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