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Oct 23 2012 10:46pm
left right



fresh or start over?

think the dots need to go not sure

edit:: not used to smudging and liquidfy. i usually just c4d spam with minor smudge and adjustment layers

This post was edited by AbDuCt on Oct 23 2012 10:52pm
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Oct 24 2012 07:00am
looks ok mang.
need to bring the render in slightly towards the middle a bit
lower the opacity on the dots
make the render more visible
just have a look at some smudging tuts it just takes a heap of time to get good. all the impressive smudging tags are done with a gfx tablet.
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Oct 24 2012 04:12pm
Quote (Kewday @ Oct 24 2012 09:00am)
looks ok mang.
need to bring the render in slightly towards the middle a bit
lower the opacity on the dots
make the render more visible
just have a look at some smudging tuts it just takes a heap of time to get good. all the impressive smudging tags are done with a gfx tablet.


thanks ill try that now.
going to try your suggestions now

FAKEENDIT::

this betteR?




think i might play with adjustment colors a bit

This post was edited by AbDuCt on Oct 24 2012 04:37pm
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Oct 24 2012 06:46pm
this is probably your best work

3rd that is, the 1st sucked a lot

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Oct 24 2012 07:32pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Oct 24 2012 08:46pm)
this is probably your best work

3rd that is, the 1st sucked a lot


yea

idk what i was thinking it was like 12pm at night and after pulling 36 hours everything seems good
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Oct 26 2012 10:22am
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Oct 27 2012 01:01am
Bit chaotic, lacks flow.
Looks flat/plain.
But idk your preview's work so idk where u at gfx-lvl-wise or w/e.
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Oct 27 2012 01:02am
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Bit chaotic, lacks flow.
Looks flat/plain.
But idk your preview's work so idk where u at gfx-lvl-wise or w/e.


pretty much just a c4d spam whore check profile

dont have any of my older better work backed up lost it when i moved to my new rig
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Oct 27 2012 01:09am
Quote (AbDuCt @ Oct 27 2012 09:02am)
pretty much just a c4d spam whore check profile

dont have any of my older better work backed up lost it when i moved to my new rig


Oke, well. Then I spose you should try something abit more simple, no offence or anything.
Like the basic stuff like flow/depth/lighting. Go slow, or it'll end up chaotic.
I know I did alot back in -07-08 :)
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Oke, well. Then I spose you should try something abit more simple, no offence or anything.
Like the basic stuff like flow/depth/lighting. Go slow, or it'll end up chaotic.
I know I did alot back in -07-08 :)


yep.

i dont really use photoshop allot unless its to correct my photos i take. these signature things are just a side thing to pass time.

ill go slower and focus on those things though next time i do a semi serious one
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