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Aug 11 2012 01:42am
just wanted to show my progress and get a few tips on what to strive for; THIS IS NOT MY FINAL COPY!
things I see I need to fix;
realistic dirt
small dirt filled areas (as if real dirt and how it would flow through the fingers)
realistic tree trunk
blending and edges of hands etc

tell me what you think i need to fix/work on.

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Aug 11 2012 01:44am
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Aug 11 2012 04:42am
I see two problems that should be resolved to make it look more convincing, the roots and and the tree's shadow.

You can see the shadow from your hand that the actual light source caused, it makes the outter fingers and part of your left palm a few shades darker as a normal shadow would. The tree's shadow however is just black, as if its shadow is somehow consuming all light, which is just not realistic. It needs to be represented with the same values as the current shadow that the light source is making. Take a ball and put it in your hand near a similar light course, the ball will not have a black shadow, it will be similar to the shadows represented in the original photo.

Second, the roots. The will need to have the appearance of being on your fingers not hovering above them, you can do this by again using the shadows and light already cast on the fingers. It is safe to assume that the roots would have close to the same shadowing and in the same areas due to the nature of dirt. To make it more convincing you will need to shape the roots around that look giving them the same curves/bumps as your fingers, then adding some volume is places that roots would be flowing through.

There are other problems but they are minor IMO to the two that I pointed out, and I feel fixing the two problems will improve this 100%.

Keep going with it, gl!

This post was edited by Tetu_880 on Aug 11 2012 04:43am
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Aug 11 2012 05:53am
Sick :drool:

try without shadow
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Aug 11 2012 02:05pm
Its not blended at all.
Blending is key to photo manips imo, aswell as inspiration.
This is very unoriginal.
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Aug 11 2012 04:44pm
This looks fake
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Aug 11 2012 09:00pm
Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Aug 11 2012 06:44pm)
This looks fake

...obviously, no one grows a tree out of their hands.

Quote (TzL @ Aug 11 2012 04:05pm)
Its not blended at all.
Blending is key to photo manips imo, aswell as inspiration.
This is very unoriginal.

#practice
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Aug 11 2012 09:09pm
Quote (Trig @ 12 Aug 2012 05:00)
...obviously, no one grows a tree out of their hands.


#practice


jesus did.
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Quote (Archivist @ Aug 11 2012 11:09pm)
jesus did.


Shit your Absolutly right. This is jesus' hands btw. Took it myself when he came over for dinner the other day. Turned my water into wine also, we had a good talk.
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Quote (Trig @ Aug 12 2012 11:18am)
Shit your Absolutly right. This is jesus' hands btw. Took it myself when he came over for dinner the other day. Turned my water into wine also, we had a good talk.


careful when J dawg comes to your house. First its all nice, hes making extra bread and fish for the dinner guests, then 20 minutes later some nice pinot. 2 hours later hes got his crew of 12 bros over and some cheap hoes throwin a major rager, I can't tell you how long it took to get 300lbs of bread crumbs vacuumed up. My house still smells like beer and hookers.
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