Looks oversharpened, and all them particles ruins it. To chaotic

move on from this one, start another

made the focal better less sharpened less particles and almost no fractals.

would have taken your advice and moved on but i was already working on fixing the moment i set it on here i just started hating on it the more i looked at it

iuno the kind of jungle background seems too bright or low quality
but you made progress so far keep it up

did a little soft brushing

yup
tbh this one is a bit of a cluster fuck, a decent job complimenting the render with that bg though
also, fat side borders almost never look good

lol render doesn't go wit bg at all and too hurtful on the eyes other then that gj

what the hell you talking about the render fits very well with the bg