i pen tool a lot but never pen tooled for these kind of things.
posting this because i feel like i did a horrible job and not pleased.

hoping to get some advice on vectoring and shapes, you can ignore the rest.

wow some real talent on jsp here. great lighting an flow o.o, not a pro at pen tool so i wont attempt a critique at that.

I suck at pen tooling but honestly i dont like anything on your piece espacially lighting

I just woke up so I'll keep this short.

Its very chaotic and bright.
All them colors does'nt work together.
Be carefull when choosing a bg, you dont want the bg to steal the thunder from the pentooling nor the focal, keep it clean.
Lose the gmap.
And again, colors is just..

This post was edited by TzL on Jul 5 2012 09:23am

Women shouldn't art. Nor read or write.

haha

I made you a sammich

Reported for excessive flaming and personal attacks.

i know everything else is off i only want to hear results on the pen tool part only taking the color comment still need vectoring tips no gmap used.

vectors tend to look better with simple implications such as gradients or some very light texture, mixing it generally tends to make it too bold and obnoxious

as for 'cnc the use of the pen tool' not much to say, simple shapes and lines here, keep practicing I guess