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Aug 12 2010 09:26pm
umm soo im currently iso some advice for the hair< not exactly sure if im cool with it yet 8-/




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Aug 12 2010 09:29pm
it too high, unless shes got a really abnormally shaped head haha

also her right arm looks broken, backwards almost
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Aug 12 2010 09:34pm
Quote (Subtle @ Aug 12 2010 10:29pm)
it too high, unless shes got a really abnormally shaped head haha

also her right arm looks broken, backwards almost


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Aug 12 2010 09:48pm
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http://avatar.pure34.com/users/datdude/7129413820060707000958.jpg


i like the dude in the back checking her out,

but as far as your wip. i guess just the shading is whats making the arm look weird, but its exactly the same as the stock

the hair just really bothers me tho, looks like a mop on her head, other then my sub-par unhelpful comments i cant give any advice cause ive never dont a wip before :\
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Aug 12 2010 09:58pm
Quote (Subtle @ Aug 12 2010 10:48pm)
i like the dude in the back checking her out,

but as far as your wip. i guess just the shading is whats making the arm look weird, but its exactly the same as the stock

the hair just really bothers me tho, looks like a mop on her head, other then my sub-par unhelpful comments i cant give any advice cause ive never dont a wip before :\


haha, ty though. i can work with what you said


Edit: workin on does eyes. my vector looks nothing like her

iso how to do da hair ploz!

This post was edited by datdude377 on Aug 12 2010 10:00pm
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Aug 12 2010 10:02pm
your using alot of colors that arent even in her hair...s he has like a darker orange but not WAY darker than her normal hair color and jsut kinda a yellowish / light orange... but u put white and brown in there ... thers ur problem
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Aug 12 2010 10:09pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Aug 12 2010 11:02pm)
your using alot of colors that arent even in her hair...s he has like a darker orange  but not WAY darker than her normal hair color and jsut kinda a yellowish / light orange... but u put white and brown in there ... thers ur problem


ty skank. orange n yellow i see, but when i color pick them it comes out close to what i have. even the highlights come out monotone. but i suppose the rest of the chick is kinda soft colors. ima go try it
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Aug 12 2010 10:10pm
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ty skank. orange n yellow i see, but when i color pick them it comes out close to what i have. even the highlights come out monotone. but i suppose the rest of the chick is kinda soft colors. ima go try it


then maybe your doing something wrong :O

more yellowish for the highlights... idk how u get brown/white =/
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Aug 12 2010 10:22pm
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then maybe your doing something wrong :O

more yellowish for the highlights... idk how u get brown/white =/


well i did kinda just add the white. but the brown is the orange on the stock. not really orange eh?
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Aug 12 2010 10:23pm
Quote (UncleMuscles @ Aug 12 2010 09:10pm)
then maybe your doing something wrong :O

more yellowish for the highlights... idk how u get brown/white =/


Quote (UncleMuscles @ Aug 12 2010 09:02pm)
your using alot of colors that arent even in her hair...s he has like a darker orange  but not WAY darker than her normal hair color and jsut kinda a yellowish / light orange... but u put white and brown in there ... thers ur problem


i don't think he's doing ANYTHING wrong with the hair by doing this. in fact, i think he should use even more colors that aren't in the original stock; it makes it more original and interesting.
use more different, WARM colors. just put the darker shades and lighter shades in the right places.

you vectored the whole shape of her hair solidly, even the outer parts where strands are more faded and less thick which is why her head looks so weird, Subtle. i think you should have just lightly stranded the outer edges.










other than that, i think it looks fucking great tbh

This post was edited by duCkk on Aug 12 2010 10:25pm
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