Hi Guys, I still know a few people in this section, others I don't know yet as I have been busy irl. Anyhow I just opened PS for the first time in forever maybe I could get some input from you guys. I am pretty 1 dimensional but willing to make changes, this is unfinished, but I just have no ideas and most of this is drawn with my mouse so proportions may be off. Thanks!
V1


V2


Maybe I should make something more colorful? I could make something comples but I just dont have the time. let me know if there is something you would change, be harsh, I am used to it.

I feel that this is too cluttered, maybe I should play with more fill colers and different Gmaps. Here is what I have without Gmaps or gradients:

No Comments Yet!!!

I think that is a sign to remake, I suppose I will make a smudge tag and delete this shit!

Would Give Critscism But Cant Even See The freakin Picture cause you took it off of photobucket......

lol i know right?

I reposted pics, but looks like shit so I am starting on something new.

i think you should work into it more, 2 much negative space

I removed the lines and some texture, I think it looks Flat and too Mono, I need to find a good color scheme.

This is the first tag I have seen from you since.... Since you posted GDGC!

It's got some cool elements, but those weird disc-shapes are an eye sore. Actually, I quite like the face and the general idea, but it needs some better execution.

e: I liked the sheet music

This post was edited by nerobellum on May 30 2010 08:02pm