Hello, i am looking for someone to rewrite an old story i wrote many years ago.

I do not want the story changed, i just want it altered to have proper english, and written in a better way
as if you read a book they are better at explaining things, like for example:

He entered the door to the tavern,
could be rewritten something like

As he approached the tavern door made out of oak wood, he noticed the cracks in the wood by the shining light... (something something)

I am not a writer, but i hope i got my point across what im looking for...

https://www.cosrintwo.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=463

that is the text i wrote, if anyone think they can rewrite it, do let me know and name your price, i can get more forum gold so dont be afraid of the 200 i'm sitting on.