Quote (ResIpsaLoquitor @ Jun 3 2019 12:05am)
Real life lawyer here, language is my jam. I would need more details to appropriately give you a price. If your interested in my service private message me the details of the document, such as function of the article, intended audience, current word count.
This person literally posted that "language is my jam" and then proceeded to get SO many things wrong.
"Real life lawyer here, language is my jam." -The comma here is incorrect since it is two independent clauses. Either separate them into two sentences, or, use a semi-colon.
"If your interested in my service private message me the details of the document" -Used the wrong form of "you're" (LOL) and missed a comma between "service" and "private," which connects the two dependent clauses.
If you're looking for an actual Grammar Nazi to assist, I'm happy to review your document. If it's just one page, as you say, I'd be willing to do it for 250 Fg. Let me know!