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Quote (TheReborn_Magi @ Dec 31 2018 02:14am)
theres some hints at the right direction but still a bit too chaotic and the render/effects to render are quite bad. watch out for the straight verticals and horizontals (the black on the right and the left edge of the render)

the background purple/green is the best part

https://i.imgur.com/WeB7Eec.png


ah i see thanks its hard to make the c4ds flow :\
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best yet by a large margin. FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY a render that isnt just straight up and down
the focus is a little too centered and the contrast with the brightness is too much (those whites tho, especially the skin)
effects are nice, text is decent and i like the font color switch up
purple bg is really nice, gonna nitpick and say top right feels a little empty and sparkles layer on top could be touched up to add more depth
the big black mass in the bottom rightish is not great, loses me on what is happening there, probably because contrast making it too dark? (if its legs like i assume, it would be a cool touch to have some light beams be clipped by the closest leg)


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feeling some stuff in the background, i like the colors (+color matching from the render)
render is weak tho, too linear
i'd love to see the psd if you dont mind sharing

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best yet by a large margin. FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY a render that isnt just straight up and down
the focus is a little too centered and the contrast with the brightness is too much (those whites tho, especially the skin)
effects are nice, text is decent and i like the font color switch up
purple bg is really nice, gonna nitpick and say top right feels a little empty and sparkles layer on top could be touched up to add more depth
the big black mass in the bottom rightish is not great, loses me on what is happening there, probably because contrast making it too dark? (if its legs like i assume, it would be a cool touch to have some light beams be clipped by the closest leg)




feeling some stuff in the background, i like the colors (+color matching from the render)
render is weak tho, too linear
i'd love to see the psd if you dont mind sharing


Thanks and noted all the cnc. Will pm you psd.
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Quote (LostInMyMind @ Jan 16 2019 01:25am)


cool elements thrown together into chaos making the entire piece weak imo
bottom left is good, bottom right around hand is cool, rest is ehh
not a huge fan of the color palette being so all over the place and the big chunks of empty space show a clear waste of the larger canvas size
the playing card sucks and the blue glare sucks

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is that not blindingly bright to you?
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is that not blindingly bright to you?


kind of is but idk i thought it came out okay
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