thjis is pretty close to good, but some composition, color stuff is too random, a lot of the pieces lately seem like "almost there" in a few categories which i think is improvement



a small slice is nice effects, rest looks like its not good / unfinished, like you totally got bored on the right side.
dont be so heavy handed with the lighting, especially when the face is so yellow and then below the neck nothing? just putting a big blur of color on lighten/overlay is weak technique

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Sep 19 2020 03:41pm

Ah kk. So subtle is more suitable and lighting should be the same?

prob the best tag yet in terms of fundamentals, it still feels like you are working with too much space and leaving it too empty. quite a few of the effects are avg but i like the color/composition, dont like the typo

This post was edited by TheReborn_Magi on Sep 20 2020 08:44pm

Thanks reborn. Will try to work on it but i like negative space at times.