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Quote (LostInMyMind @ 19 Jun 2020 04:16)


I like this one. Few things that cross my mind when looking at it on phone screen - blending is decent but it seems you have done lighting on top part of render with white brush or equivalent. Her head is just white, no shading at all. It is also a bit monotone, might be what you aimed for.
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Quote (Tharapita @ Jun 19 2020 01:38am)
I like this one. Few things that cross my mind when looking at it on phone screen - blending is decent but it seems you have done lighting on top part of render with white brush or equivalent. Her head is just white, no shading at all. It is also a bit monotone, might be what you aimed for.


Thanks and will work on it.
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bg is starting to develop in a good way especially in the top left area. I would pick and choose how certain c4ds overlay your subject in this case i would just erase the orange ones ones that overlap her to begin with. disrupts the flow in a bad way. Could be a better offer as a bg element. If you were going for some sort of overlap I would choose something else.
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Thanks laoshun.

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Quote (LostInMyMind @ Jun 22 2020 02:42am)


this one is dope. great work all around, i especially love the transition of the smoke
the bottom left and right parts are lovely. having said that, i wonder how the tag looks when you would cut the right side, if it would emphasize the focal more or not.

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im always happy when you use a good quality render and dont oversharpen the tag like here (and the other one i quoted) because i feel like a lot of your other tags are solely held back by using a lq render/being oversharpened even though they are really good otherwise
the brown background is really interesting, there are barely any tags with brown (understandably) but imo it works here
only problem i have is the yellow speck under her right eye but i dont know if thats the render
i personally would have changed the red spots in her hair but thats up to preference
also i am way worse than you at tagging so take everything with a grain of salt :ph34r:


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Quote (Jajangmyon @ Jun 23 2020 11:11am)
this one is dope. great work all around, i especially love the transition of the smoke
the bottom left and right parts are lovely. having said that, i wonder how the tag looks when you would cut the right side, if it would emphasize the focal more or not.



im always happy when you use a good quality render and dont oversharpen the tag like here (and the other one i quoted) because i feel like a lot of your other tags are solely held back by using a lq render/being oversharpened even though they are really good otherwise
the brown background is really interesting, there are barely any tags with brown (understandably) but imo it works here
only problem i have is the yellow speck under her right eye but i dont know if thats the render
i personally would have changed the red spots in her hair but thats up to preference
also i am way worse than you at tagging so take everything with a grain of salt :ph34r:


Thank you. Very easy things to follow. Np at the tagging skill, it doesn't take a tagger to like art.

/edit besides im apparently a novice to moderate LOL

This post was edited by LostInMyMind on Jun 23 2020 01:34pm
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