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you really need to chill with the sharpening
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you really need to chill with the sharpening


kk will do
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The earlier stuff is better than the most recent stuff.

I like:


Crit: I'd try to blend the character in with the colours more. The colours are great, but the clothing doesn't match the background at all.

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quite a bit. But, for the latter, you need to spend more time on the lighting. See how the lighting on this tag: http://i.imgur.com/IoizIJy.png pops out. Compare to your tag where it looks quite flat. If you get that light to pop, it will work much better and help the tag immensely. It looks kind of sloppy and doesn't pop in the way that it could. Also, you are relying on that soft brush in the right corner. Don't do that. Where is that light coming from? Use the light sources from the c4d you've used to your advantage. They will help the tag overall. The tag is also too sharp.

The last few seem rushed, blurry and messy. Try to think through each stage of what you are doing. Why did you pick that colour? Why do you like that resource? How does the thing you just did aid to the tag?

The best advice would be to seek out tutorials and follow them, but that might be hard as tagging has kind of died.

This post was edited by Friedrich on Apr 23 2018 06:25pm
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Thanks for the reply. I'll try to spend more time on them as i go along, but yeah the last few were me trying to experiment a bit.
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