Quote (Guo @ Sep 16 2017 11:35am)
Hello men
I am currently scouting for haters or people who can critic at the standard jsp level
There seems to be no other place out there as toxic as jsp so I decided that this was the best place to create this thread
The criteria is simple; I provide you with work and you hate on it as much as possible by stating all the reasons why it sucks
You list as many points as to why it’s bad and how it can be corrected
Ex. This specific sentence is bad because it was written awkwardly and this is the correct way of how it should be written
Tbh I prefer a “pay per mistake” type of system so that the work is done properly but a fixed amount is good too
Will only be looking for serious answers; i will not be accepting crap answers nor will i be paying for them
FG is not a problem, will be paying well for quality answers (the last 2 ppl I paid got 500fg each and can pay more than that)
post or pm
That post is filled with grammatical errors to no end. This is why I will hate on this post.
1. This post has no paragraph format. The text was simply centered for no good reason.
2. There are no full stops at the end of each sentence.
3. Each sentence is listed in a single line.
4. The word 'i' instead of 'I' has appeared, twice.
5. This is grammatically incorrect: "FG is not a problem, will be paying well..." It should be: "FG is not a problem, I will be paying well..."
6. Overall it is obvious that there was no thought into the layout or proofreading to make the little corrections before posting.
It is not all bad though as the size of the text has increased so it is easier to read as opposed to the rest of us who do not increase the size of our text before posting.