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Sep 11 2017 02:22pm
Couldn't edit post.. sorry.

Forgot to apply a sharpen to the above.

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I don't really care for the c4d look too often. It's nice to see something bigger than 350x150 from you and without borders, but 400x150 is max. That's 450x150.
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Sep 12 2017 09:10pm
Yeah... I realized I goofed that up after I did it (And a couple others) was going to resize if needed.

But I'll give your list another shot sometime soon!
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Sep 13 2017 07:06am
Some of my recent additions:







I'd like to see some stuff similar to, or better than this :bouncy:
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Sep 13 2017 10:15pm
Quote (annexusquam @ Sep 14 2017 08:39am)


It doesn't look like it's finished.

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I know this render well enough to know that her hat is cut on the right side, which is the default place for me to look at her.
Apart from that, her skin seems a bit bright, and I don't care for the K. She's a lil bit far on the right.
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Quote (Kokua @ Sep 13 2017 10:15pm)
It doesn't look like it's finished.



I know this render well enough to know that her hat is cut on the right side, which is the default place for me to look at her.
Apart from that, her skin seems a bit bright, and I don't care for the K. She's a lil bit far on the right.


Well, the reason for the cut hat is because she is cut off there and it's a straight line which IMO looked really bad so I tried to smooth it out xD

But thanks for the criticism!
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Quote (Damein @ Sep 14 2017 02:51pm)
Well, the reason for the cut hat is because she is cut off there and it's a straight line which IMO looked really bad so I tried to smooth it out xD

But thanks for the criticism!


Since I can't move the image w/o preserving the background, I cropped it instead. This helps with the render not feeling like it's too far out to the side.
I drew out and filled the corner of the hat that was cropped out, adjusted it to match the original color, but that was changed when I added lighting.
The colors looked a bit washed out, and her skin was too bright (it still seems a bit bright), so I brought back the original render on top of yours, and edited the colors.
It looked like you were trying to add lighting with the white brushes behind her, but I swapped that out and tried some different lighting.
Also removed the K.

You could either take this as suggestions and continue working on it to make those changes, or not, up to you.
You would also be able to do some of these changes easier than me.

This post was edited by Kokua on Sep 14 2017 01:45am
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Quote (Kokua @ Sep 13 2017 11:06pm)
Some of my recent additions:

https://i.imgur.com/MKO9gUD.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/rFo2JsJ.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/vGGAcG7.jpg

https://i.imgur.com/rhoWAcd.jpg

I'd like to see some stuff similar to, or better than this


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