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Nov 15 2010 09:49am
Quote (ericswanson_19 @ 15 Nov 2010 17:47)
the font doesn't fit. that font is for comic books.

the concept isn't very strong.. there isn't any practical application for it as well due to the ball being so far away from the text.. it would look awkward on anything.

i'm glad you posted it as black and white though.

also the correct slang word is Ballin' (with an apostrophe)


i think he might be messing with us.
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Nov 15 2010 12:12pm
Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Nov 15 2010 03:47pm)
the font doesn't fit. that font is for comic books.

the concept isn't very strong.. there isn't any practical application for it as well due to the ball being so far away from the text.. it would look awkward on anything.

i'm glad you posted it as black and white though.

also the correct slang word is Ballin' (with an apostrophe)


Lol give me a break..

font is ccchatterbox bold italic, looks kinda like comic sans though, i might change it, just needs to be bold, sans, and italic

i see wat u mean with the ball being too far from the text fucking up the unity, trying to think of how to fix it. As for it being bland, i cant really think of anywhere else id add information without it being extraneous or distracting, i mean the concept might seem oversimplified but its just supposed to be worth a chuckle



anyways its just a little weekly homework for 2d, gonna have to vector the text and save the img in illustrator instead of converting to photoshop cus quality got pwnt but atleast every1 in critique today thought it was hilarious. Were just starting a unit on logos so its not like this is my "thing"



Quote (sgtSlotte @ Nov 15 2010 03:08pm)
you sure got balls to post this


and y is that?

This post was edited by humari on Nov 15 2010 12:13pm
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Nov 15 2010 12:28pm
Quote (sgtSlotte @ Nov 15 2010 11:08am)
you sure got balls to post this


lol I get it
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Nov 15 2010 03:39pm
Seriously just do "Ballin" with the baal as the i's dot or something... even that would be better then this shit -_-
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Nov 15 2010 04:02pm
Quote (ericswanson_19 @ Nov 15 2010 10:47am)
the font doesn't fit. that font is for comic books.

the concept isn't very strong.. there isn't any practical application for it as well due to the ball being so far away from the text.. it would look awkward on anything.

i'm glad you posted it as black and white though.

also the correct slang word is Ballin' (with an apostrophe)


ohh damn, politely served.
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Nov 15 2010 05:45pm
Quote (datdude377 @ Nov 15 2010 10:02pm)
ohh damn, politely served.


haters gonna hate

atleast he gave me something constructive...
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Nov 15 2010 05:59pm
scrap idea, start anew :)
Sometimes it's good to start fresh instead of "putting lipstick on a pig"
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Nov 15 2010 06:01pm
Quote (humari @ Nov 15 2010 06:45pm)
haters gonna hate

atleast he gave me something constructive...


yap

trolls gana troll
people gana peep
tweakers gana tweak
flippers gana flip
tippers gana tip.

atleast i can troll like a prao...
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Nov 15 2010 06:14pm
Quote (AnimeFTW @ Nov 15 2010 11:59pm)
scrap idea, start anew :)
Sometimes it's good to start fresh instead of "putting lipstick on a pig"


Lol, this is a freshmen foundation level illustrator course, i spent about an hour on this and did fine against a bunch of newbs in critique who all thought ballin was lolworthy, the font definetly needs to go tho

concept is strong enough for what im doing here, grading expectations r low cus most kids in the class have never made logos before. Im just looking for ways to make it better compositionally, i drew up a few better designs in my sketchbook still just figuring out illustrator... spent way to much in photoshop giving me bad habits like resizing text images :D

anyways, i know its not a good logo but it will suffice, i only wish ppl wud give me the common curteosy of constructive critism not even expecting it to even be polite or anything, instead of just writing "ha".... i think most of em dont realize that tags r soooo ez to make in comparison with logos
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Nov 15 2010 06:17pm
Quote (humari @ Nov 15 2010 07:14pm)
Lol, this is a freshmen foundation level illustrator course, i spent about an hour on this and did fine against a bunch of newbs in critique who all thought ballin was lolworthy, the font definetly needs to go tho

concept is strong enough for what im doing here, grading expectations r low cus most kids in the class have never made logos before. Im just looking for ways to make it better compositionally, i drew up a few better designs in my sketchbook still just figuring out illustrator... spent way to much in photoshop giving me bad habits like resizing text images :D

anyways, i know its not a good logo but it will suffice, i only wish ppl wud give me the common curteosy of constructive critism not even expecting it to even be polite or anything, instead of just writing "ha".... i think most of em dont realize that tags r soooo ez to make in comparison with logos


tl;dr

but i did see you mentioned something about something being harder. ( thats what she said)
so ill just go ahead and mention that difficulty is all relevant.
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