I think it could be 10x better with better whatever it is... color grading, dynamic range adjustments. And also shaky. I imagine you'd need to buy something for that, but I wonder if you could fix that a bit more than where it's at with software?
I think with those changes it would be really enjoyable.
First thing I noticed was the shake, and the straight out-of-camera look to the image. Shot with Nikon DSLR right? Idk what it is, doesn't even look like 1080p when shot at 1080p. I'm not a video guy so idk.