ok so opinions is this good?

Befor


After

sure its good, for naruto. whole series basically full of blank emotionless faces, fits just perfectly with that zigzaggy mspaint finish

e- for any other series u might wanna smoothen things up

This post was edited by Pavise on Sep 16 2015 12:29pm

i agree that the lines are a tad pixalated thanks

you missed a drop of blood on the corner of the mouth of the girl being carried, and as was said, your lines are jagged sometimes and need to be smoothed/cleaner

otherwise, pretty good

This post was edited by Eep on Sep 16 2015 05:47pm