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Jul 25 2014 02:23pm
So about five months ago someone told me to try and write a poem to describe how I felt at the time... I'm not really the type of person to write poetry, but posting it here? That I can do. Anyway, here it is:

Decisions are sometimes made
In error we sometimes say
Sorry. I didn't mean it
The words I said, things I did
That time when I broke your heart
It was an accident
Sorry, I didn't mean it
Here have mine, this heart
That doesn't work
But understands
The importance of words to me
How they can break a man
Or make a man
But it's not really who I am
This person that's always mad
It's not me
The one that makes you sad

It's a shadow
A scream
A dying dream
It's what you meant to me
It's what you meant to me
And eventually
I hope you'll see
That I'll give you everything
That's how much you meant to me
Can't you see

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Maybe at least one person might like it, let me know what you think.

Thanks.
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Aug 4 2014 09:27am
Run of the mill angsty teen drivel, tbqh.
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Aug 5 2014 05:45am
I feel that you probably shouldn't write anymore poems.

Maybe you could try painting or something.
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Aug 5 2014 12:58pm
Quote (fuzzy159 @ Aug 5 2014 07:45am)
I feel that you probably shouldn't write anymore poems.

Maybe you could try painting or something.


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Sep 21 2014 05:42am
don't seek affirmation from d2jsp it won't happen.

whether it's good or bad really won't matter.

a hint..if this wasn't a troll, for an emoti. poem

don't sweat the rhymes, just speak your heart.
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Oct 16 2014 03:24pm
Quote (fuzzy159 @ Aug 5 2014 04:45am)
I feel that you probably shouldn't write anymore poems.

Maybe you could try painting or something.


Do just the opposite. Continue writing. Much like everything else, the more you do it the better you'll get. Stop doing it and you'll lose the skill you once had.
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Oct 24 2014 01:20am
Long and great
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Oct 29 2014 01:19am
just some random, freestyle:....

I see the floor beneath my eyes, beneath my gaze

hearts pump blood moves

No longer a barrier no one cares hairier

we are moving and yelling randomly candidly

is this freedom?

HA, its just 1 type of freedom

my soul releases at the possibilities.

and I am satisfied without knowing without seeing
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Nov 9 2014 10:15pm
Poor rhythm but I think you had a good idea at first.
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Nov 24 2014 08:12pm
My feeling is depressed
Because of thoughts i can not process
My words get repressed
as a love turned to distress.
Thier love became
a total obsession
part for a recess
into a love recessions
creeping for a repossession
thier love an unpaid heart.
And though
it was time to go
their worlds almost seemed to slow
as thier love turned to cold.
then it seems
you visit me
tanatalizing beutifully
with an image of our love.
And now perhaps
abit too late
but i can no longer hesistate
three words for her
I love you.
She has a reason
for being and keeping
her heart safe sleeping
undisturbed since loves last pass.
for her so fleeting
him a true deep feeling
i love you not for life.
him cursed forever
but her a feather
in the storm of life.
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