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May 19 2014 10:37pm
My favorite piece written when I was 20.

Her breath is still felt on my lips

tongue tingles from the kiss

amidst her aroma I sit

my thoughts of her linger on a bit

her body was God’s gift

her touch, I can’t put a finger on it

cheeks and jaw static in sweet awe

diaphragm stutters, as I breathe “ahhhh”

eyelashes sewed my lids shut

postponing the inevitable awakening

dreams shattered again

But I’ve waited so patiently

I close my eyes again so hastily

wanting what I had

to forge love through masonry

as another day sets

I set a table for one, wastefully

the knife scours the china

the wick scorches my misery abrasively

I’ve had it basically

the moon reaches it’s noon

a single silhouette sighing oxidatively

again she is facing me

I’m only strides from love

why isn’t fate chasing me

her hand glides down my arm

until our palms meet

lifting mine to her balm cheek

Fingers tremble from the percussions of my heart’s beat

inhaling starts deep

if this is real

my spirit can finally depart me…


This post was edited by Boost4U on May 19 2014 10:40pm
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May 20 2014 11:44am
Quote (Boost4U @ May 19 2014 11:37pm)
My favorite piece written when I was 20.

Her breath is still felt on my lips

tongue tingles from the kiss

amidst her aroma I sit

my thoughts of her linger on a bit

her body was God’s gift

her touch, I can’t put a finger on it

cheeks and jaw static in sweet awe

diaphragm stutters, as I breathe “ahhhh”

eyelashes sewed my lids shut

postponing the inevitable awakening

dreams shattered again

But I’ve waited so patiently

I close my eyes again so hastily

wanting what I had

to forge love through masonry

as another day sets

I set a table for one, wastefully

the knife scours the china

the wick scorches my misery abrasively

I’ve had it basically

the moon reaches it’s noon

a single silhouette sighing oxidatively

again she is facing me

I’m only strides from love

why isn’t fate chasing me

her hand glides down my arm

until our palms meet

lifting mine to her balm cheek

Fingers tremble from the percussions of my heart’s beat

inhaling starts deep

if this is real

my spirit can finally depart me…


i like how you got this from the internet...
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May 20 2014 02:41pm
Quote (blake37 @ May 20 2014 10:44am)
i like how you got this from the internet...



From when I posted it on my FB -

If I remembered my Myspace password it'd date back to 2005.

You're a moron just because my Poem has been plagiarized off other sites doesn't make it not mine.
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May 20 2014 03:22pm
birthday big boy
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Nothing-To-Do/390814944306238
September 13, 2012. Her breath is still felt on my lips tongue tingles from the kiss amidst her aroma I sit my thoughts of her linger on a bit her body was God's gift.. it goes on didnt copy whole post.
prove you had it on myspace then i will believe you.

This post was edited by blake37 on May 20 2014 03:23pm
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birthday big boy
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Nothing-To-Do/390814944306238
September 13, 2012. Her breath is still felt on my lips tongue tingles from the kiss amidst her aroma I sit my thoughts of her linger on a bit her body was God's gift.. it goes on didnt copy whole post.
prove you had it on myspace then i will believe you.


Are you stupid?

https://www.facebook.com/notes/ryan-wilson/dream/164893338109

This is from 2009, this is my Facebook. Please do math. You think a page with 19 likes makes their own content? Until you find someone posting this poem prior to November 3rd, 2009... Don't call me a thief.

I don't know my Myspace password, if I did I'd get around ~50 of my other poems that I'd love to have.

http://wenku.baidu.com/view/60b400270722192e4536f6a1

This site even stole my poem, a very popular Tumblr account also found it and shared it with 200,000 notes until I requested it to be put down. You're a tool, tbh.

This post was edited by Boost4U on May 20 2014 04:28pm
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May 20 2014 05:02pm
Quote (Boost4U @ May 19 2014 11:37pm)
My favorite piece written when I was 20.[/B]


in a message you sent you said you are 23. its 2014 how can it be from 2009? stop lying.... so sad
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May 21 2014 08:40am
Quote (blake37 @ May 20 2014 04:02pm)
in a message you sent you said you are 23. its 2014 how can it be from 2009? stop lying.... so sad


Guess I was 17 when I wrote this, didn't know it back so long.

As you can see from my post above - you're an idiot.

All the proof is said above, you found sites that posted it in 2012. Yet I have it posted on Facebook 3 years prior. When it went famous on Tumblr, a bunch of Facebook pages picked up on it.

Are you truly this dumb?

Since you're so dumb - here's my Facebook LINK... https://www.facebook.com/notes/ryan-wilson/dream/164893338109

I'll even MESSAGE you it on it a bunch of other poetry/short stories I have written that are JUST as good at this, btw go fuck yourself.

This post was edited by Boost4U on May 21 2014 08:43am
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Jul 22 2014 11:08pm
poetry is no longer young

Nowadays, people want what they want

just like music
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