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May 17 2012 07:39pm
ug.. um the bubbles shouldnt just stand out like that, and dont just put c4d's ontop of render and call that blending
did you use a gradient map purple orange? cause it dominates your colours too much, and then theres a peach light
work on blending and colours for now
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May 17 2012 07:50pm
Quote (killkillkillkil @ May 17 2012 08:39pm)
ug.. um the bubbles shouldnt just stand out like that, and dont just put c4d's ontop of render and call that blending
did you use a gradient map purple orange? cause it dominates your colours too much, and then theres a peach light
work on blending and colours for now


I like the bubbles in the background, but I agree with the bubbles in the foreground, it was more just not feeling complete.

No I didn't use the gradiant if you are talking about the purple and orange in the render that is the colour of the render. May I ask what is wrong with the peach light?

I agree with the blending but I don't see much of a problem with the colours.

This post was edited by AngeloMisery on May 17 2012 08:04pm
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May 17 2012 08:10pm
the light seems outta place
you should do soft brushing on and off the render and do some clipping masks with some dark soft brushing to fix the lighting
the colours are dull, nothing stands out, maybe contrast? idk
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Quote (killkillkillkil @ May 17 2012 09:10pm)
the light seems outta place
you should do soft brushing on and off the render and do some clipping masks with some dark soft brushing to fix the lighting
the colours are dull, nothing stands out, maybe contrast? idk


Ok cool idea on the lighting I will give it a shot for sure.

Well I think I took away from the colours a little bit to try and make them pop a bit more.
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May 17 2012 08:13pm
the blurry bg/bubbles arent great either
also that snake is distracting
if you pm me your skype i can help you with it
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May 17 2012 08:52pm
Quote (AngeloMisery @ May 3 2012 10:29pm)
http://i.imgur.com/HCsyx.png


I like this as well. Can you do more with it though? It's a tad bland.

Also the white lines / bright green thing to the far right distract.


e/ Also, if you're following tuts for any of these (which would be a good idea to do for at least every other sig), it'd help us a lot if you posted the tut link with the sig.


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I like this as well. Can you do more with it though? It's a tad bland.

Also the white lines / bright green thing to the far right distract.


e/ Also, if you're following tuts for any of these (which would be a good idea to do for at least every other sig), it'd help us a lot if you posted the tut link with the sig.


No tuts I typically go on my own or from psd.
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May 19 2012 08:15pm


Learning with KillKillKill (he did the hard stuff) .
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Quote (AngeloMisery @ May 19 2012 09:15pm)
http://i.imgur.com/DNnd9.png

Learning with KillKillKill (he did the hard stuff) .


Blue spot over face is a nono. Other than that, I don't know. It's kinda chaotic/random for my taste.




Quote (AngeloMisery @ May 19 2012 09:18pm)
The only blue spot on his face is from the render.


Oh... it just bothers me. Idk why.

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Blue spot over face is a nono. Other than that, I don't know. It's kinda chaotic/random for my taste.


The only blue spot on his face is from the render.
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