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Apr 1 2012 02:46pm


I really feel like I have hit a wall creatively zzzz
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Apr 1 2012 04:12pm
bubble c4ds are amazing when you liquify them just letting you know
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Apr 1 2012 04:15pm
Quote (AngeloMisery @ Apr 1 2012 01:46pm)
http://i.imgur.com/5Dig9.png

I really feel like I have hit a wall creatively zzzz


don't like. its too plain on the right side.
low quality. and i sense you use lots of nebula stocks, just by looking at your previous. i suggest to stay away from those, it helped me a lot.
im no expert, but the lighting doesn't make sense to me.

idk if you saw this already, it helped me a lot.
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=50972641&f=105
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Apr 1 2012 04:32pm
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don't like. its too plain on the right side.
low quality. and i sense you use lots of nebula stocks, just by looking at your previous. i suggest to stay away from those, it helped me a lot.
im no expert, but the lighting doesn't make sense to me.

idk if you saw this already, it helped me a lot.
http://forums.d2jsp.org/topic.php?t=50972641&f=105


I am confused as to how the lighting doesn't make sense to you.

There is also no nebula stocks in it :S . Actually only two of the sigs have nebula stock both having the same person as the render.

Edit: sorry 3 :S .

Quote (Mizter @ Apr 1 2012 05:12pm)
bubble c4ds are amazing when you liquify them just letting you know


I will be sure to try it out thank you.

This post was edited by AngeloMisery on Apr 1 2012 04:38pm
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Apr 1 2012 05:36pm
Is there a digimon in your current tag?

The light source is way too bright, and the tag loogs over saturated. Also what's with the chain on lower opacity on the left?

Render placement isn't terrible, and it looks like it's headed in the right direction.
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Apr 1 2012 05:56pm
Quote (Melodude @ Apr 1 2012 06:36pm)
Is there a digimon in your current tag?

The light source is way too bright, and the tag loogs over saturated. Also what's with the chain on lower opacity on the left?

Render placement isn't terrible, and it looks like it's headed in the right direction.


I will answer in order :P .

1. Yes, patamon to be exact :P .
2. Thank you I will fix it.
3. The bubbles have since been liquifid which I think helped it a lot as I think they where a big problem :P
4. Part of the background it isn't on lower opacity just not as bright :P .

Better?

I turned down the lighting for you as well :) , also moved the background no more chains :P .
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Apr 1 2012 06:12pm
Quote (AngeloMisery @ Apr 1 2012 07:56pm)
I will answer in order :P .

1. Yes, patamon to be exact :P .
2. Thank you I will fix it.
3. The bubbles have since been liquifid which I think helped it a lot as I think they where a big problem :P
4. Part of the background it isn't on lower opacity just not as bright :P .

http://i.imgur.com/vcZF9.png Better?

I turned down the lighting for you as well :) , also moved the background no more chains :P .


I think it looks quite a bit better. :thumbsup:
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Apr 1 2012 06:42pm
Quote (Melodude @ Apr 1 2012 07:12pm)
I think it looks quite a bit better.  :thumbsup:


Thank you kindly.

Took odin's advice tried something new no real clue how it turned out other then bright.

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Apr 1 2012 07:20pm
Quote (AngeloMisery @ Apr 1 2012 06:42pm)
Thank you kindly.

Took odin's advice tried something new no real clue how it turned out other then bright.

http://i.imgur.com/I6sJG.png


actually its not bad, the shapes are solid, the flow focal depth etc seem to work.
the only problem is the saturation, and the colors.
red/orange/yellow is a really really warm combination.
theres not really anything to even it out either, I woudl just change the colors all together, possibly swapping for a royal red+gold+w/e color
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Apr 1 2012 07:33pm
Quote (DB_odin @ Apr 1 2012 08:20pm)
actually its not bad, the shapes are solid, the flow focal depth etc seem to work.
the only problem is the saturation, and the colors.
red/orange/yellow is a really really warm combination.
theres not really anything to even it out either, I woudl just change the colors all together, possibly swapping for a royal red+gold+w/e color


Speak of the man himself :P .

OK I took your colours got the codes for them and used them, I had to use the bright yellow on one of them to add a bit of depth to it still hopefully it isn't to bad :( .



This seems it would be a lot easier to do with a pen tool :P I think at some point I should try and learn that damn thing.
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