effects look really oversharpened, like you can see the pixels on them

of the 2 lp's, prefer the first. texture in the 2nd doesn't seem to have much relevance to the rest of it.
finished this one ytdy, overall i think it's okay.. but annoyed a bit by the flow, in that i couldn't really define it. her tentacles are pointing everywhere, wasn't sure how to approach.

not really any foreground effects either, idk if that's cuz i made the bg ones too light or if i just didnt like how they'd cover the render.
This post was edited by Gensokyo on Jul 5 2012 07:58am