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Nov 9 2010 01:16pm
You're the light in my eyes
you're the reason for my heart keeps beating
you're the reason that i wanna live

and right now, im living a perfect life,
A day without you, is a day without life
A day without life, is a day without.. Nothing

Just remember, i'll never wanna lose you,
i'll never wanna let you down

You're my angel, my diamond, my everything
Just remember, I love you more than anything


I love her soo soo soo sooooo much! :love:
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Nov 9 2010 01:46pm
what's a peom?
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Nov 9 2010 01:48pm
Quote (crowdedbo @ 9 Nov 2010 20:46)
what's a peom?


Failure fml ..

P o e m ^
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Nov 9 2010 01:51pm
weren't you dead btw?

or did you make that up for attention?
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Nov 9 2010 01:55pm
Quote (crowdedbo @ 9 Nov 2010 20:51)
weren't you dead btw?

or did you make that up for attention?


well ...

you're the only one that didnt notice that i got hijacked?

And i've been accepted by Paul, it WAS a hijack not for attention ...

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Nov 9 2010 04:28pm
The delivery isn't that good =/
I take you're new at poetry too =)
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Nov 9 2010 08:15pm
Quote (Jogamok1 @ Nov 10 2010 05:16am)
You're the light in my eyes
you're the reason for my heart keeps beating
you're the reason that i wanna live

and right now, im living a perfect life,
A day without you, is a day without life
A day without life, is a day without.. Nothing

Just remember, i'll never wanna lose you,
i'll never wanna let you down

You're my angel, my diamond, my everything
Just remember, I love you more than anything


I love her soo soo soo sooooo much! :love:


Gheeeyy.. Hey wait, I think i hear the crack of the whip... The pussy whip that is... lololol
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Nov 9 2010 08:20pm
That's terrible
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Nov 9 2010 09:26pm
Quote (MiTiXz @ Nov 9 2010 10:20pm)
That's terrible


nah, i like it.
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Nov 9 2010 11:03pm
maybe like

you're the light in my eyes
you're the reason why my heart keeps beating
you're the reason that i'm still living

right now i'm living a perfect life
you're the air i breathe, my world - my everything
and a day without you is a day without anything

remember i'll never wanna lose you
because my love for you is true

you're my angel, my diamond, my everything
just remember, i love you more than anything.


edit: just my 2 cents of edits

This post was edited by JAYZONE on Nov 9 2010 11:04pm
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