This guide is bad, especially when it discusses pvp.
No way you can duel anyone good with 11 frame tele. 37fcr is a must.
Also 300+dex adds a ton of AR. 10-12k ar is enough for most hammerdins and BvCs. If you're using ravens or angelics vs high defense characters, don't bother as you won't beat those characters consistently anyways.
Not to mention you rate smiters medium/hard. Any good smiter will 5-0 you. Guess that's a typo on your rating.
Also any good charged strike zon will 5-1 or 5-0 you. You failed to mention them.
Bowazons are probably the easiest class to beat. Since you have block, they won't be doing much damage to you. Most zons have awful resists, so a few pulses of holy shock or a few thunderstorms will kill them without you ever having to land a zeal.
I don't understand your concept of hit and run fighting. Pretty much when you land on someone and zeal them, you're going to want to continue zealing them to put them into fhr animation with your 50k damage, so you can kill them after 1-3 zeal commands. You're not going to zeal once, then try to get away with your 10 frame tele, that's stupid.
Advocating 10 builds is retarded. Pick which you think is the best one (jewelers armor obviously), and then 1-2 others. I would probably list the GA build (for better blocking and 90% res if you liking being BM with 95% es), and a cheap build like using treachery.
One positive thing I can say is that those dreams are sexy
I disagree , I saw your sorc and shes more vs caster then melee chars so you cant compare it to this sorc
10 k ar is pretty low. And btw really to expensive to get with 3 k mana and 1.5 life so...
This Sorc has lower fcr but I dont think thats such a big problem for my exprienc it isnt