Hello, I guess this is the place that I would post this? I am decent with grammar and english skills, but I know some of you folks here are true wordsmiths

There are some sections of my rules for a ladder/tournament that I need help re-wording to make more sense. Please if you are interested give this a read and post anything that you think needs clarification.
Once I have found the places I think need the most work I will isolate them in a secondary post in this thread and we can work on them together!
Thanks to anyone with time to help in advance!
Guild Sith Melee Ladder
(US East Non-Ladder)Ladder Council MembersSpamBam
BAJuicer
CHALLENGE SYSTEM1) To be added to the ladder post: d2jsp account name / diablo 2 account name / character name / character class.
2) you are allowed to challenge up to 2 ranks above you until you get to #5 then you must duel everybody to get to rank one.
3) You must PM the other party about the challenge prior to posting.
4) Melee rules apply to all duels (see page one)
5) Challenges will be best of 3 sets, first to 6; you must win each set by 2 duels.
6) If you issued the challenge you must wait 12 hours after completion of the challenge to issue another challenge.
7) If you lose a challenge you must wait 48 Hours to re-challenge the same person.
8) 3 day dodge rule (afk, no-reply, no-show is considered as a loss) 2 consecutive "dodges" will result in removal from the ladder.*
DUELING EQTIQUITE[ Starting ] - Both must have "go" over head at same time action begins; If one "go" drops first, wait for them to put it up again.
[ Difficulty ] All duels will take place in nightmare difficulty.
[ Gear Change ] You may change gear one time during a set and one time between each set.
[Tokens ] Use of tokens during duel is forbidden; once before a set starts is permitted.
[ Inventory ] The only items allowed in character inventory or charms.
[ Life Tap ] - In zeal vs. zeal duels both players must agree on life tap for it to be permitted.
[ Enchant ] - Enchant is always permitted in conc vs. zeal, never in conc vs. fury or jab, and in conc vs. conc duels both players must agree to enchant for it to be permitted.
[ Miss Click ] - Restart duel, no points awarded.
[ Strength Glitched ] - Automatic disqualification if you die and can't pick up your body.
[ Running ] - Point awarded to opponent
[ Draws ] - If neither player survives a walk back to town, counts as a draw. No points are awarded to either player.
[ Chilling Armor ] - Must not be on prior to a duel, referee to kill off surviving player with chilling armor.
[ Bad Manners] - Automatic disqualification.
BAD MANNERS- Do not smite, charge, leap, whirlwind.
- Do not use items that emit auras that cause elemental damage.
- Do not cast any charges during duel.
- Do not angle
- Do not pre-buff.
- Do not use potions.
BANNED EQUIPMENT[ Weapons ]
- Grief, Doom, Eternity, Death, Cranebeak, Hellslayer. Messerschmidt's Reaver, Fleshripper, Nord's Tenderize, Baranar's Star, Horizon's Tornado, Stormlash, Schaefer's Hammer, Windhammer, Astreon's Iron Ward, Djinn Slayer, Lightsabre, Azurewrath, Frostwind, Flamebellow, any weapon with poison damage, and any item that casts amplify curses
[ Armors ]
- Stone, Prudence, Nosferatu's Coil, Arachnid Mesh, Cleglaw's Pincers, Blackhorn's Face, Giant Skull
[ General ]
- Any item that: casts slow or elemental skills over level 5; is ethereal without repair mod, zod rune, or zod bug; grants knockback; has poison damage; or slows target. Total maximum elemental damage may not exceed 200.
[ Exceptions ]
- Fortitude (Chilling Armor), Steel Carapace (Iron Maiden), Andariel's Visage (Poison Nova), Breath of the Dying (Poison Nova), Phoenix (Firestorm)
*If you cannot complete your challenge on time it is your responsibly to PM your challenger to inform them and then post in thread asking for an extension.
If you fail to do this dodge rule will be enforced.This post was edited by SpamBam on Nov 13 2016 08:59pm