post your own freestyles, about whatever you want
it can be battles, if you wanna call someone out.
it can be written, just don't post lyrics of another song that's already created please.
good luck

Ok here it goes.... Srs rap time

I'm sick of bein stuck in the middle with all these fucking riddles
Ticking clocks and paradox
I'll never be content with this payin rent and money spent
for the government to keep us pinned
One of the years that we're hear we're gonna jam up the gears
and cut off the stream of this mean scheme of this corporate machine
We're gonna walk the streets with a thousand unhappy fans
with plans of ways of change that big brother is runnin his games
and stop makin slaves that pays the wage to get oil for the so called royal
We're gonna wake up the slumbered gather the numbers encumbered
to power the flower of the seed of freedom we've been needin instead of sleepin
We're gonna march downtown and slap these clowns
Let them know the reason they were found is for us and not the other way around!!

gds



original Poo spit btw

My thoughts are infinite, cant be contemplated
killin emcee's i should be incarcerated
cant stop the lyrics in my head being stated
scrambled head faded
brains like confetti
young in the game, but deep i am already
dazing minds delerious, just like eddie
lol idk xD

if we're spitting online make it sound more original
spit an ill line not something bout some dumb criminal
my shit is subliminal and yours is too loud
i'm secrectly running the world while you can't run a crowd
yes i'm a white and i'm proud and I just turned nineteen
my lyrics hurt you like a knife in your spleen and i'm mean
and i mean when i spit that you know i'm legit so much so that a nigga won't quit

Big Cuzin, Goose and a pistola
Workin hard since a youngin, eatin off a Motorola
Cuz Mommas the Earth, and Daddys the Streets
So some nights I had to fight to get a bite to eat
Wish I was straight with some legit pape', so I try
But nobody wants a felon for no 9 to 5


Just written. More later, g2g.

This post was edited by Cuzo on Feb 13 2010 04:23pm

If you're going to go political, I feel like you need to go further and stick to one topic per song. Make it as narrow as possible. This is way too generic, and cliche. It seems like you are afraid to truly dive in and commit to one subject instead of jumping around. i.e. a full length freestyle written simply about Halliburton.

more flows less talkin imo

Black people are gay
They should go work in the hay
Dick sucking is what they play
Steal your TV and act like it's Okay
Rape your daughter and get away
Smoke your weed and rage when they don't get their way
The boat back to Africa will be thee day
White people are free from this dismay
HEY HEY HEY
BLACK PEOPLE ARE GAY GAY GAY

Good song is good?

The central theme I would have to say is the corruption of the government.

In those regards I would have to say that I did stay on point.

Not bad rhyming, but the lyrics themselves will easily win a prize for worst of all time and so on.