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Oct 1 2010 03:43pm

I realllly want to get into Lp's but ofc the issue of me being terrible with them arises.

this is kinda my first one i guess, its still a wip suggestions/cnc is apreciated

any advice regarding large pieces would be great

hope i didnt permanently damage anyones eyes

e:

this was all texture/smudge/brush if you was wonderin

This post was edited by mamllee on Oct 1 2010 03:44pm

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Oct 1 2010 03:53pm

Besides the text this would work great as a background for a flyer/ad/wall/infosheet/whatever, or this style.

Maybe add some hard-to-see silhouette of a huge seamonster somewhere to spice it up, dno

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Oct 1 2010 03:55pm

Quote (Konkari @ Oct 1 2010 11:53pm)

Besides the text this would work great as a background for a flyer/ad/wall/infosheet/whatever, or this style.

Maybe add some hard-to-see silhouette of a huge seamonster somewhere to spice it up, dno

thanks

and yeah i actually played around wif some bigger deep sea fish in there but i felt it was a bit too much

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Oct 1 2010 04:40pm

looks good except there are multiple light sources

which would be okay imo, but they start out lightly then get very dark in the middle for no apparent reason

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Oct 1 2010 04:41pm

Quote (mamllee @ Oct 1 2010 04:43pm)

I realllly want to get into Lp's but ofc the issue of me being terrible with them arises.

this is kinda my first one i guess, its still a wip suggestions/cnc is apreciated
http://i849.photobucket.com/albums/ab54/mamllee2/deep.png

any advice regarding large pieces would be great

hope i didnt permanently damage anyones eyes

e:

this was all texture/smudge/brush if you was wonderin

i like to see ya trying new things, but i get an everall empty feeling with this mate. i feel as though i have nothing to look at.

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Oct 1 2010 04:41pm

Quote (Sk4t3r @ Oct 2 2010 12:40am)

looks good except there are multiple light sources

which would be okay imo, but they start out lightly then get very dark in the middle for no apparent reason

its underwater, brah

theres shit floatin around and light doesnt travel all the way down

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Oct 1 2010 04:43pm

Quote (mamllee @ Oct 1 2010 04:41pm)

its underwater, brah

theres shit floatin around and light doesnt travel all the way down

then it should be a gradient from top to bottom, correct?

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Oct 1 2010 04:44pm

Quote (Sk4t3r @ Oct 2 2010 12:43am)

then it should be a gradient from top to bottom, correct?

not sure i understand what your saying, if you mean it should be even then no, i wanted to have a some rock-like structures and slightly murky water

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Oct 1 2010 04:45pm

what is the light source supposed to me? the sun or what

if sun then it should all be light to dark not light area on right dark in middle light area on left random light area on bottom left

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Oct 1 2010 04:51pm

Quote (Sk4t3r @ Oct 2 2010 12:45am)

what is the light source supposed to me? the sun or what

if sun then it should all be light to dark not light area on right dark in middle light area on left random light area on bottom left

Like i said, that dark part is supposed to be a rock-type structure, thats why theres that texture on it. The other darkish spots are just murky water or more rock

I accept the fact that i could have executed this better, but its not a picture bro, its not going to be 100% realistic ;/

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