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Sep 2 2010 01:19pm
Lacking a focal imo.

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Sep 2 2010 01:21pm
I think it looks pretty cool, I'd loose the text and work a little on the lighting.

Aside from that im givin it a 7.5/10 ^_^
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Sep 2 2010 01:21pm
kill that typo before it grows on you
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Sep 2 2010 01:22pm
Quote (nerobellum @ 2 Sep 2010 15:21)
kill that typo before it grows on you


ofc.
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Sep 2 2010 01:27pm
lol thats almost the same thing as a Monet or Picasso painting with blinking bleeding cowboy on it . Damn the text ruins it all xDD

The tag itself, sexyy left side great atmosphere, decent smudging etc....
the right side could use some work

Make a sig version and crop abit of the right side,...and fix the saturation there,....might look cool
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Sep 2 2010 01:31pm
I really like that smudge style you have, its got some pretty nice depth and texture to it imo.

pretty cool piece here :thumbsup:


and yeah kill the typo etc etc
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Sep 2 2010 01:35pm
not interesting at all imO. plain boring. no real depth in it. no real focal. boring composition. bad colors.
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Sep 2 2010 01:35pm
Quote (Souforte @ 2 Sep 2010 15:27)
lol thats almost the same thing as a Monet or Picasso painting with blinking bleeding cowboy on it . Damn the text ruins it all xDD

The tag itself, sexyy left side great atmosphere, decent smudging etc....
the right side could use some work

Make a sig version and crop abit of the right side,...and fix the saturation there,....might look cool


Thanks, wills do.

Quote (mamllee @ 2 Sep 2010 15:31)
I really like that smudge style you have, its got some pretty nice depth and texture to it imo.

pretty cool piece here :thumbsup:


and yeah kill the typo etc etc


Thank ya! I lub smudging I love it more than c4d whoring.


Quote (RecoveryChannel @ 2 Sep 2010 15:35)
not interesting at all imO. plain boring. no real depth in it. no real focal. boring composition. bad colors.


Its funny, I feel the same way. Except for the compo.

This post was edited by Ctrlaltkick on Sep 2 2010 01:38pm
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Sep 3 2010 03:19am
it looks somewhat like burning sky. first idea i had was apocalypse when i saw it. getting tired of this text style thou.
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