v1, no typo added yet ofc... still deciding wheter it's worth it or not
not sure if I like the right side that much, but I can fix it up

There is too many stars/dots to the left imo, looks strange with so many and none on the right side. anyway, I think it got alot of depth, and blends good. Good colors. And I think you should add text
I dunno, maybe reduce some of the stars, and maybe remove alittle of the c4d on the right corner and add some stars there aswell, dunno

I like it pyro but the depth seems weird. I kind of don't know what to focus on whenever i am looking at it. The stars on the left are def too sharp and the hand up front seems too blurry.

This post was edited by Akaris on Jan 1 2010 05:16pm

the c4d on the right side looks completely off compared to the shapes on the left

second try

you need to blend dude!!

compo looks good, but akaris was right on, there's no focal, which leads to the little to no depth issue

i guess it could use some lighting as well

needs some big time improvements but that render and this sig so far have a lot of potential imo, keep putting time/effort into this one

v2 is much better
maybe try leaving them bright
but keeping them on both sides

i've seen this render worked before and the other sig had the same problem. A TON going on on the right and almost nothing on the left. Other than that, I don't like the fire type thing on the far left of the render as it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the elements of the sig. But mostly just fill it out.

looks much much better.

Wasted it is blended well. The render doesn't jump out at you and look like its just slapped in there

thanks everyone,
it's good to finally get cnc... i'll make a new version if theres more criticism ;p